osirr I have a suggestion for you. If you use the post editor on steemit.com, your post will look a lot easier on the eye.
Here is a post about how to use it: https://steemit.com/steemit/@ilyastarar/newbies-tutorial-the-3-post-formatting-editing-options-on-steemit-that-you-must-know
You're doing great keeep it up!
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