Hi there, and welcome to the PulpRev, comrade! Great to have you with us. I just found your story, and noticed that you posted the entire thing at one go. While it's great that you actually had the whole thing to begin with, I can't help but feel that you'd gain more visibility simply by spacing out the parts more - serializing it, so to speak. You get more potential viewers over a number of days, after all, and there's a specific window in which people tend to upvote your stuff here. Just my two cents.
Always good to see a fellow pulper, so please, keep on keeping on!
RE: A Tiger in the Garden: Part IV