I can see this story going in so many directions. Even the genre is open. There is a suggestion of the sinister, of course (more than a suggestion), but you give the authors great latitude. This should yield varied results, which I think is good for the contest.
I'll try to write something, especially with the extended deadline.
BTW--a rich beginning, well crafted. Bravo!
Glad to see another edition of FTS
RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #67!