First of all you were supposed to use a different heading here.
So right from the beginning this is wrong. You will need to go back and redo the heading.
And it looks like this sentence is also wrong, so once you're done fixing the heading it will also be necessary to fix this sentence.
You were supposed to put a picture of a mountain lion here but this is not a picture of a mountain lion:
It looks like instead of using a picture of a mountain lion you just used a picture of an old rusty bucket that's been shot all to pieces.
Please be advised that mountain lions and old rusty buckets are very different regardless of whether or not they have been shot all to pieces.
Your picture is incorrect so please fix it as soon as possible.
Oh my. No no no. This is so wrong.
What on earth have you done with this paragraph? This paragraph is about as far away from correct as you can get. This is the paragraph where you were supposed to talk about how to identify various wild animals based on their tracks and excrement, but instead you appear to have written about something completely unrelated. Do you understand that because this sentence is about drinking six cups of bulletproof coffee between 3am and 4am, and not about the telltale characteristics of bear feces, it is incorrect? Also, since our general rule is to never write more than four sentences in any given paragraph, you will need to just delete this sentence altogether. And this one too.
No. It is not acceptable to use this heading to describe the composition, shelf life, and aerodynamics of clay pigeons, because this heading is supposed to be about how to determine which wild mushrooms can be safely harvested for human consumption, and which wild mushrooms can be reasonably expected to kill a human upon consumption.
So you will need to redo it.
Also, this quote is incorrect. John Muir did not say "The mountains are calling and I must go kill myself." That is the wrong quote. Please fix this quote so that it says what John Muir actually said which had nothing to do with suicide. – John Muir
5 Emergency Blankets You Can Count On When You're Down For The Count
Correct. This heading is correct.
But what is this picture? This picture is wrong.
This picture has nothing to do with emergency blankets. Therefore, it is incorrect and will need to be replaced.
This picture also violates our policy of only writing evergreen content. Those trees are aspen, and aspen are not evergreen regardless of what season of the year you take their picture.
Do you understand? Wrong. Please adjust this heading so that it properly introduces the risk of lightning strikes in the backcountry as opposed to explaining how the invention of the backpack scooter makes it a trifling matter to illegally operate a motorized vehicle in wilderness areas.
You will also need to either edit or delete this long jumbled barely coherent run-on sentence run-on run-on sentence run-on sentence run-on sentence sentence run-on run-on sentence run-on sentence run-on run-on run-on run-on sentence sentence run-on sentence run-on sentence run-on sentence run-on sentence, as it repeatedly violates our policy against profanity.
No. Incorrect.
It is not acceptable to substitute a picture of metal deck furniture sitting on top of a 100-foot vertical mineshaft in the middle of nowhere for a concluding paragraph.
Wrong. No no no. This is wrong and incorrect:
