I felt it could have had a slightly better flow, it was a touch awkward in terms of its structure or pacing, but then again, I didn't read it out aloud.
Appreciation in its meaning and intent were certainly achieved.
I felt it could have had a slightly better flow, it was a touch awkward in terms of its structure or pacing, but then again, I didn't read it out aloud.
Appreciation in its meaning and intent were certainly achieved.
RE: Afterwards