Hello everyone,
I'm not sure if this will fit in with the Freewriters community but after playing through the Fontaine storyline of Genshin Impact I found myself pondering if it could have been told better based on the hints the game devs had released in the months leading up to it to promote it. I've modeled my telling of it after the way the Genshin wiki writes their summaries for the Archon Quest stories.
Since these stories are pretty long (the whole thing took about 15 hours to play through) I don't have the RC to actually get my version out in text. So please forgive me but I put it into an image instead.
Also I think it might be good to provide the link to the Genshin wiki page with their summary of what miHoYo actually released so you guys can compare.
This topic will have my reworking of the combined Acts III and IV from the original which I'm turning into my Act I. I felt the events from both could have been consolidated into a single act, eliminating some unnecessary parts which would free up space for more story.
Please see my version below:
Hopefully this is well-received. If it is I'll continue with Act II next.