Hey guys! Ok so the other day I presented my Act I for the Genshin story.
Today's will be Act II. Just like Act I, my Act II combines the pre-existing stories told in miHoYo's original Acts III and IV which you can find here to compare. By compressing four of the acts into two I was able to add additional original story into my Acts III and IV to expand upon the information we'd gotten and also add in a few more characters that further made use of that information.
Please see Act II below:
I will admit that by fitting in two acts of story into one I lost some of the details I did appreciate and there was also a large tonal shift between their version and mine. However, I did manage to move some of that to the later acts. If anybody has an idea on how I could maintain the length while adding back some of those details I'd love to hear about it!