Image by drink memory of sunbeams -
merging sunset's dreams.
This picture reminded me of childhood memories of visiting Cornwall. It spoke of that atmosphere when you're young after a long day in the sun, the tired feeling of dreamy golden memories of the day, and the knowledge that you're going to be able to do it all over again tomorrow.
I think this is the essence of nostalgia also, only watered down a little. In this haiku I tried to capture that strange combining of tiredness and satisfaction that is at the heart of those childhood memories. I hope that this Haiku also reflected the traditional Japanese feel for what makes the form great:
Haiku poetry traditionally discusses abstract subjects or those from the natural world, including seasons, months, animals, and even the smallest elements of nature, down to a blade of grass or a drop of dew. While a haiku does not have to cover natural subjects anymore, it is most often used as a celebration of nature.
The Academy of American Poets asserts, "As the form evolved, many of the rules - including the 5-7-5 practice - have routinely been broken. However, the philosophy of haiku has been preserved: the focus on a brief moment in time; a use of provocative, colorful images; an ability to be read in one breath; and a sense of sudden enlightenment and illumination."
Reference from - Rules for Writing Haiku
To read more about the aesthetics of true haiku, and the difference between haiku and senryu, please check out my post: Haiku Vs Senryu - The Aesthetics of Form
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