Hi @frosh. Please note our community rules which state clearly that rape and violence are not welcome in stories published in our community. We also mention this in every fiction prompt post. You can also read our article on (The Ink Well's stance on violence](@theinkwell/violence-and-brutality-in-fiction-the-ink-wells-stance).
We will consider curating your story if you edit that part. The rest of the story is nicely written. It's just unfortunately against our community rules.
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