I feel this is done ... so I will leave it as done .. and it is here in Makersplace :
https://makersplace.com/mitrai/days-end-1-of-3-37153/
Still struggling !
I am still working on this one
Look out once more with tired eyes, and see
How, where the sun has set, the sea and sky
Merge in the darkness, then will you see the trace
Of shining light left by my parting gaze.
~R Tagore