Well the moral is real good but it is not a poetry. You could've written it in an article format and still be appreciated. It doesn't rhyme. Have a look at my poetries. You will get why I am saying that.
Well the moral is real good but it is not a poetry. You could've written it in an article format and still be appreciated. It doesn't rhyme. Have a look at my poetries. You will get why I am saying that.
RE: WHAT IS REALLY THE PURPOSE OF LIFE…what’s the whole point why we exist…why do we live???