I missed last week πππ
I guess that's what happens when you are in different communities and writing different posts, it could get a bit overwhelming ππ
Anyways.....
I'm here again with the 3rd post of my Poem analysis β¨....
Today I have a real doozie for you, a poem from one of our people on hive ππ₯
Y'see it's an elaborate ploy of mine to bring some popularity to the work.
- STEP 1
Establish yourself as a budding yet talented analyst on poems_______ β
- STEP 2
Find a Shakespearean whale on hive
- STEP 3
Write a moving analysis on his/her work and see how much the whale blows on you
Unbeatable plan right? π
As we can see Step 1 is checked..
I was going to do step 2, but here I was bedazzled by another poem...
Now she's no Whale π, but she is at least Shakespearean, so maybe a half check on step 2?
Please give an open mind and a warm eye, to our poem of the week
Jealousy
That, my fellow poem readers was Jealousy by @jhymiππ₯,
You digging the rhymes, yeah?π
Here's what I think about it π
Analysis
The writer uses fantabulous wordplay to make a heartwarming piece about an ice cold emotion.
Describing Jealousy as a monster with sharp teeth, she shows how it could transform people and kills relationships.
How it destroys the mind and twists the soulπ.
She then goes on to tell us how to conquer this beast...
Purge your heart to become new...
This would open our eyes to allow us see our object of envy in another light π―οΈ.
The author of this piece gives us a whole life's lesson, in not more than 24 lines π
A stunning achievement if you ask me
Although, this may be just a personal opinion of mine but I believe that Jealousy is a massivepusher( I forgot the termππ)
Jealousy pushes some to work harder.
The urge to want what Man A has
well if you can't steal it, you earn it...
Yh?