holy smoke stacks! This is brilliant!! I love how the ending is the very end, yet tells of the middle as well. I normally am a bit put off by time stamps in a story, but this works insanely well, and really adds to the building emotion. In the hour, you are able to go on this journey with her, and her choice seems worth it. A masterful ending to say the least!
RE: Finish the Story: Quitting Life