Where am I going wrong with posts ?

Fellow Steemians , I have a few queries regarding my posts about my travel to Amman Citadel and Petra.

While I am grateful to everyone who read the post, upvoted and commented, I still feel a bit disappointed as I don't think I received an overall good response.

I know in the beginning it is always going to be difficult and would require some tome to build a network of my own, but I feel there may be some weakness within myself at play here. The post itself may not be good enough (I'm not really a good writer). It may be a matter of poor formatting or title. It could also be a wrong time to post but I am not sure what is it.

If you guys can go through the posts here and here and give me some advice on what is wrong with the posts and how can I improve them then it would be great.

Thanks in advance :)