@matkodurko Thanks! This was meant to be a harsh opener to the story and I'm glad it did it's job to emphasize the cruelty of the Imperials and the helplessness of the people of Kodaia.
I may publish it after it is completed to some E-platforms like kindle. But while I'm writing it, I will just publish it to Steemit day by day.
RE: Chapter One- ...It All Began When...