Good work, really good stuff. Even though I felt you could have elongated the plot a little longer. Put in more details, weave a more complicated thread. Lol, we humans like to complicate things. Good job
Good work, really good stuff. Even though I felt you could have elongated the plot a little longer. Put in more details, weave a more complicated thread. Lol, we humans like to complicate things. Good job
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