@ejaredallen, it really terrified to the kids if they didn't know what happen. And with James gone, wondering what would happen to the kids.
Your story was easy to understand and digest. I love to read this type of story, I no need to bother what meaning to certain word. You have write it in simple english but delivered the story. I wonder, if you continue the story, how you continue it. To explain why James escape and Regal revenge, or how the 5 kids ve without James around.
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