Hello @michalis
Wow! just Wow
I am in awe
It's like we are in sync. you know this movie right. Pacific Rim
. The Jaeger pilots neural bridge thing.
yeah lol
Every step of the story was awesome. Kept me in the zone. Dang! i totally zoned in on this. I felt the story physically.
Saw what you did with the door thing. You pulled it off brilliantly. Hope it wasn't too tasking hahaha
this story is what I call true art
the transitioning shows your level of adroitness to pull this of.
BRAVO
This is full of energy, suspense and thrill.
"you name it"
I may consider to drop some contributions later on. but for now
I am lovin it
Cheers
RE: The story in series: Chapter Two