very nice .. looking forward to read the next chapter . please have a look at my post too and i am new into fiction writing and hope to get some support . you dont need to upvote me , just to write in the comment section what do you think about the posts , and how to improve more. thanks a lot
https://steemit.com/writing/@cryptodreamer1/a-fake-identity-by-doctor-crime-fiction
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