Good work, and very brave to share a work in progress
Giving away his work like that didn't do Andy Weir any harm though, did it?
I'm thinking about doing the same with my WIP, and actually inviting feedback and editing suggestions as it's a fairly complex structure for me to keep track of - never mind plot out
You've got a lot of - deserved - positive replies, and I notice you've not asked for any editing feedback
If you don't mind, can I make this minor observation?
everything is black, life is perceived as a feeling of endless space without boundaries
I think it should be ; after black, but that's a small detail
Good luck with the rest of it and I look forward to catching up with the story
I saw your part 16 post earlier today, and came here to start at the beginning
RE: Sci-Fi Novel, Origin Andromeda - Part 1, The Cube