I almost missed this one! I really enjoy these and I can't wait to see where it goes.
I hope you don't mind, but I spotted a a few minor typos that I'll quote here:
I rose from the couch, just ase Morgan's magic swirled around me, tickling a little,
as
Glancing into a wall mirror I saw nowan intricate bu
now an
Actually, perhaps change the word order: Glancing into a wall mirror, I now saw an intricate...
I noticed the Knights’ armor had Morgan's initials carved onto the front of the chest-piece.
Carved into? I think it should be into..?
"No, I do not. .
Lots of dots.
Was this a recruitment speech?.
Extra punctuation, no period needed.
RE: Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 4 - Food for Thought