Very well written. Love how you kept it suspenseful the whole way through. It also has a touch of mystery which I greatly enjoyed. You seriously pulled me in and had me ready for more at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read chapter 2!
Very well written. Love how you kept it suspenseful the whole way through. It also has a touch of mystery which I greatly enjoyed. You seriously pulled me in and had me ready for more at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read chapter 2!
RE: ABANDONING RUMI: Chapter 1 — TWB First Chapter Challenge Entry