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Just a head up, Scuzzy. I posted another video, if you're interested in watching.

Thank you for the kind words. I’ve been meaning to post the other videos, but I’ve been extremely slow. Keep your eyes out for two more.

Oh, man. That would’ve been an interesting back and forth 😂

I wish I could upvote this a million times.

From the moment I read this, I knew it was meant to be a spoken-word piece. The musicality of the rhyme is apparent, though, I'd consider cutting it down a bit or seeing if you can't use more subtly in

This is fantastic! There is only one tiny change I would make. I think the last line needs to be broken into two so that last part really kicks your readers in the teeth. Let "you have done your

Thank you, kindly!

Not a bad idea! Cheers.

You are far too kind. I'm going to give you a follow so I may do the same.

Hey, tcp. I found your link in the chat and decided to provide a little bit of feedback. This piece is highly emotive. I have a feeling many reads will look at this and feel strongly once they’ve reached

Thank you so much!

Brevity certainly suits you. It takes impeccable word choice to present a piece of fiction is such a concise fashion, and you’ve done so wonderfully.

Hello, Emito! I hope you're doing well. I'm going to break down this poem by stanza and provide some feedback for you. The first line is incredible. This metaphor is perfect for describing relationships

This poem truly has fantastic potential. I'm going to break this down by stanza: In the first stanza, the first line needs a little tweaking. There's nothing you need to take out, but I do feel you need

This is an excellent poem. Your word choice is impeccable and your alliteration carries the rhythm smoothly. Very well done.

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So long as he's GM, he could serve as an anti-authority figure and give WWE an excuse to push a different demographic of their roster on SD.

This is the best possible outcome. Put him together with KO/Sami and start an indie stable.

It would appear as though I certainly did! I think I was tricked by the continuity between the first and second stanzas that my brain created.

I love that quote, though I’d concede verbs and articles for you. 😂