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but until then, I'll bear the heat And my sweaty titties' defeat Oh California, why so hot? My titties scream, they've had enough But we'll survive this scorching day And pray for cooler air to come our

The sun beats down on my bare skin My chest feels like a sauna within I fan myself to cool the heat But the sweat just won't retreat I long for a dip in a cold pool To escape this fiery, cruel.... 2/3

Sweaty Titties in California #bcpoets The heat wave hits California hard Sweat trickles down my every part My clothes are drenched with salty stains And my titties, oh how they complain...1/3

Nicely said :)

You can! Just keep on writing and eventually it will be easier :)

Wow, this is incredibly beautiful and it really resonated with me. I have a small group of friends who mean the world to me, and the thought of losing any one of them is almost too much to bear.

Thank you so much for the kind words, but it's not really my world...it's yours! I just have a habit of writing poetic responses and providing my own interpretation based on what I think is going on in

I guess my reply to the poem or should I say my interpretation is that both the man at the bar and the woman are one and the same. It got me thinking that what if the man is drinking because of the same

I love it! Maybe you could do two language side by side? English version just need a quick google translate so english readers can understand a lil bit of what you're writing :)

In dim-lit corners of a smoky haunt, Where spirits dance to forget their pain, Two souls find solace amidst the fray, The man at the bar and the girl at bay. He, drowning sorrows in amber haze, Seeking

The only time when I feel calm and relaxed is when I'm writing poetry, listening to music, or watching anime

Thank you. That means a lot haha. Honestly, I just write how I feel.

I used to hate writing, but then I discovered that poetry is like a magical therapy session for the soul.

It's funny because grammar has never been my strong suit, but I have a ton of love for poetry! That very same obsession somehow led me to ghostwriting. Who would've thought, right? Life's full of surprises!

Beautiful work!

Especially during the wintertime 😁

I love it when poems are descriptive

aww thank you for the kind comment :) I actually just got hired as a ghostwriter and I'm currently applying for jobs as a digital designer as well! My dream is to make money off of my art/poems.

Apologize for the late reply. No, it was an early memecoin. Chances of losing money is really high because they don't survive for very long and you only have a small window of opportunity to sell for profit.