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Honestly I can buy that. I don't know much about India currently, but I know that politics is inherently corrupt so that makes a ton of sense.

Thanks for the shoutout! I couldn't agree more, but I think you've touched off a spark in my own mind, and I think I have a post to build on this somewhat. In any event, you're right. What made the pulps

Glad you liked it! And yeah, we can't have the main character being a completely inhuman monster. The readers need something to latch on to after all.

I try to practice what I preach lol

I like the feel of this story. The voice sounds immature, like Arrow is the one telling us what's happening. I caught plenty of grammar and punctuation errors but fixing them would destroy that feel, and

Glad to hear it. This world is way too interesting to leave at a one-shot imo.

Don't I know it. I wind up getting way too attached to characters, which is why I've got like fifteen different worlds I'm following particular characters around in. I'm working on it, though.

Glad you enjoyed it, man! I'm gonna have to do more mech stuff in the future, this one was a lot of fun. Now if I could only work out how to do one-shot stories without killing off the entire main cast...

Great story. Short, sweet, punchy, evocative without over explaining everything. You also did a good job revealing more about the world as it needed to happen instead of infodumping and expositing. A lot

Excellent work, my dude! Very entertaining story. I was never much for Arthurian legends but I love me some knight stories. I'm digging the idea of the Shattered, too. I've seen that in certain fantasy

Well, I'm probably not the best at writing advice, but I've been trying to kind of unconsciously work it into my fiction while consciously working at it, if that makes any sense. Like I read it over two

I'm glad you're digging it! This was my most recently written story. I've got other stuff coming up after that I've written months or further back, but I was really happy with how this turned out, and

Thanks! I'm glad people are enjoying the stories!

Thanks! I'm not sure how to feel about it but I'm certainly not complaining! And well they are wearing scifi armor. I didn't make it that big of a deal because word count. It's not like a suit of actual

Thanks man, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! The Curie's pretty sweet but I'm not relying on it. I just hope people enjoy the stories, to be honest. The magic internet funnymoney's nice, but I'm just glad

This discrimination, stupid man-thing! Yes-yes!

Glad you're enjoying it so far. And ah, dammit. I was trying to get the gun stuff down pat with no mistakes like that. Guess I should've stuck to guns I actually know about lol. Or put in five more minutes

Glad you liked the intro, man. I respect the fuck stories but that ain't really my bag, if ya feels me. You do you, though. Wish you all the best. Shit is mad lucrative from what I hear, it just ain't

I'ma be real witchu, chief, they really don't. This is, like, modern day, Civil War's over and done with, this thing is basically a formerly Confederacy-sanctioned branch of the military that turned into

The weebshit is where the sperging out really begins. And of course not I'm not some Europleb ffs.